Tittle: T2 Writing Learning Story.

In writing I have been Learning to...

Pretend I'm a sister, in my conscription story and describe how I felt when my brother got sent to war.  I was using interesting words in my writing like adjectives, verbs and adverbs. For example:

yelled, quickly, suddenly, shocked

I have been learning to check my writing to see if it makes sense and I use capital letters and full stops. I need to edit my writing so the reader can understand my story and think it is a good story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gqid8s0NgYlmEgRSiOh4xSwaK2JjFWsfStUvPJxqPv8/edit

I have been learning to put my ideas in order. I can put the pictures in order and explain what is happening in each picture. Sometimes I go to the library and Miss Caro helps me. 

Next Steps:

I need to edit my writing so the reader can understand my story and think it is a good story and checking all my work if they mack sense and also ask some one to help if they know what the doing.